Friday, September 24, 2021

I think Goldilocks is innocent.

 

Today I was learning to persuade someone to agree with my opinion.

I enjoyed writing this story.

I found it challenging to finish this in time.

My digital learning object shows that I think Goldilocks is innocent.

Next time I would change my writing font.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora liam
    My name is carter and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you said she was doing tiktoks
    I learned that she was just doing tiktoks
    Maybe you could add picture in

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  2. hi Liam im Boston @saint mary's school I liked the way you high litied the Goldilocks doc.

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  3. kia ora Liam
    My name is Alison from saint marys scool.I really like you high lighted your work to show us that you achieved your success criteria.You could try adding words that help describe objects like looks like, sounds like and so on.I also thought Golie Locks was guilty.From Alison

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