Wednesday, June 16, 2021

Katie's birthday.

 

Today we were learning how to add in more information about our story that we have been reading. This shows that we are good at reading why? so we can answer questions about the story.

I enjoyed writing the beginning middle and end why?because I think I did better than most of the time I write.

I found it challenging to add in more information when i'm near the end of the story because I can't think of any ideas.

My digital learning object shows where and when the story took place and the beginning middle and end and why? so we can add in more information next time we do it.

Next time I would put more information into my writing so the reader wants to read it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Liam this is Boston at Saint Marys in Room9. I like the colour wot you did to your text boxes they where super cool Liam from Boston.

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