We are learning how to add in what we saw into our writing.
I enjoyed looking at the horses on the slide.
I enjoyed looking at the horses on the slide.
I found it challenging to get the work done on time.
I found it challenging to get the work done on time.
My digital learning object shows paragraphs.
My digital learning object shows paragraphs.
Next time I would change the picture's.
Next time I would change the picture's.
Kia ora Liam
ReplyDeleteI saw the horse truck parked outside the school and wondered who owned it and why it was at a school. Now I know! Thank you for sharing your writing.
I found it very hard to read some of your writing. Are you able to edit your slide and take the dark colouring away from your writing so we can read it?
from Mrs Torrie